I Like Writing!

The following article was written by me for the essay contest at school. The results are still not out yet. So, enjoy reading!

IF I COULD CHANGE ANYTHING IN MY LIFE, I WOULD CHANGE…


Reading news on internet, I came across this headline depicting Pakistan as the most dangerous country on earth. Though it isn’t new that the world has tagged our homeland as “a haven for terrorists”, but it was saddening for me. I just could not help stop wondering as to where we are going. To me our country’s future was all bleak, full of gloom and darkness. Nothing could be done about it if the existing situation continues to prevail.

Talking about current status quo, our beloved country has descended deep into the political instability and the military regime of General Busharraf-oops! I meant General Musharraf, has further crippled the entire system of governance. Acting as a US puppet, our President is more concerned about staying glued to his chair then paying heed to even the serious matters encircling the nation. For the sake of political mileage, there had been lots of suicide bombing and the people to blame are the so-called Islamic fanatics! Talk of being a cheat. It is not just that. In near future, we are going to have a Corruption Minister-oops! I did it again! I meant the “Prime minister”, Benazir Bhutto. She has strike a deal with Musharraf about power sharing and all her previous criminal records are brushed under the carpet. It is such a bad luck that a country found in the name of justice has fallen in the hands of utterly fraudulent, selfish and treacherous rulers.

It is true that this military leadership has boosted our economy; there is still massive poverty in the country. The rich is getting richer and the majority of Pakistanis have slid even beneath the poverty line. Our staple diet: wheat has its prices sky high. The result of inflation has been that more people have come on to streets, begging for money when they could have been doing something far better. Definitely, this is the example of cruelty in its own.

The story does not end here, there is even more. The rural areas of Pakistan are still not part of the development and the poor, especially females, are still subjugated. When it comes to avarice, the landlords can stoop so low as to rip a female of her dignity to get a small piece of land owned by her family. I was so shocked to read that a girl of my age was sexually abused and all the police officer could say, to close the case and protect the powerful rapist, was that the girl was a “habitual fornicator”! Oh my, God! How can people play with others life? How can our leaders sit with their eyes closed? What has happened to the conscience of those in power? Are they so blinded with the lust for money and power that they cannot see they are devastating the life of an innocent or even more?!

This is all too distressing to even write about. Imagine the suffering of those who are actually meted out with such a fate. Truly horrible, indeed. When I look around myself and brood over my country’s current condition, I so wish I could change it. I so yearn for a chance that will allow me to restore stability to my country and ensure that every single citizen get justice. Also, with a true patriotic spirit, I will make it possible for my country to have a bright future, and the Pakistanis would be once again respected for their nationality, instead of being bullied abroad, or being tagged as a terrorist just because their homeland is Pakistan. And so I am waiting for the chance…

8 Responses to “I Like Writing!”

  1. Roha Saad Says:

    PS: I am not that of a patriot as I am sounding in the article!

  2. ur sis! Says:

    well…claps 4 u buddy 4 this 1..impressive ..till one reads the P.S. :/ well liked ur slapstix…but brd yar don u think u shud ve thrown some more suggestions…! i wud v liked 2 hear more frm u..well newyz nice job!

  3. Roha Saad Says:

    the constraint was the words limit. plus i just wanted to handover the article.
    thanks anyway.

  4. Shujaath Says:

    Impressive….even I am not a big patriot like u buddy but even i used to boast a lot of things about my country in my essay writings in school. It fetches u marks and admiration lol. But I dont think I wrote any as good and with such sarcasm as this one. so in a way it was bold too. well done.

  5. Roha Saad Says:

    LOl!
    Well no ones going to handcuff me at school for throwing sarcasm and writing like that about Mushurruf. So, I took my chance and wrote it :)

  6. another sis Says:

    well don

  7. Shujaath Says:

    Well, actually I was afraid that u would be put under house arrest like Imran Khan for talking like that about the President .

  8. sis Says:

    hey brd u in REAL danger buddy for talkin abt the respected n adorable Mr.General Pervaiz Musharaf as Busharraf!!…don blv ?? check this out
    http://www.dawn.com/2007/11/11/top1.htm
    Under the amended act, the Army can now try civilians on charges ranging from treason, sedition and attack on army personnel to “assaulting the president with intent to compel or restrain the exercise of any lawful power” and “giving statements conducive to public mischief”.

    watcha say now..(smirkin sis)

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